10-12-2013, 10:53 PM
I will add the extra c :wink:
Thanks Renatus, I look forward to others' reviews and hope to have all of the necessary changes implemented soon.
I am still working on explaining the title in the first paragraph, I have also decided to add a paragraph about the aftermath; discussing casualties and the standoff for the next day (or two?) between the two armies, and some reasons why Aetius chose not to decimate Attila's forces then and there.
Thanks Renatus, I look forward to others' reviews and hope to have all of the necessary changes implemented soon.
I am still working on explaining the title in the first paragraph, I have also decided to add a paragraph about the aftermath; discussing casualties and the standoff for the next day (or two?) between the two armies, and some reasons why Aetius chose not to decimate Attila's forces then and there.
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