10-21-2013, 02:53 PM
Anyways, looking over this in PDF format (which for some reason is easier for me than Word format) I can see I should delete the sentence talking about the Younger Brother of the Franks on Page 5, and need footnotes in paragraph 2 of page 6.
Need to work on that transition from paragraph 1 to paragraph 2 on page 8.
Need a fottnote for the sentence mentioning he split his army up on page 9.
Page 11 need to change "Alan Cavalry on his right" to "Alan cavalry on his left." Also need to change "Bulk of the Visigothic force" to "Rest of the Visigothic Force" and put it on "far right."
Need to include a footnote to the Strategicon regarding the Fulcum, providing I can get the reference. Might be able to find a reference in Vegetius or Ammianus.
Page 14 - Remove "After" in "After which the Visigoths proceeded to attack." Need to mention Hunnic Archers would have made a siege of Attila's camp difficult.
Need to work on that transition from paragraph 1 to paragraph 2 on page 8.
Need a fottnote for the sentence mentioning he split his army up on page 9.
Page 11 need to change "Alan Cavalry on his right" to "Alan cavalry on his left." Also need to change "Bulk of the Visigothic force" to "Rest of the Visigothic Force" and put it on "far right."
Need to include a footnote to the Strategicon regarding the Fulcum, providing I can get the reference. Might be able to find a reference in Vegetius or Ammianus.
Page 14 - Remove "After" in "After which the Visigoths proceeded to attack." Need to mention Hunnic Archers would have made a siege of Attila's camp difficult.
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