06-24-2015, 04:49 AM
I am an editor by trade so this may seem nitpicky:
- In the second sentence, Gallienus is misspelled.
- Right before footnote 23, you should use "who" instead of "whom;" Valentinian is the object.
- Just before footnote 25, you use auxilia palatine, I think you mean palatina.
- I think Macezel is spelled "Mascezel" and Zozimus is "Zosimus."
- God Bless Aremorica!
- In the second sentence, Gallienus is misspelled.
- Right before footnote 23, you should use "who" instead of "whom;" Valentinian is the object.
- Just before footnote 25, you use auxilia palatine, I think you mean palatina.
- I think Macezel is spelled "Mascezel" and Zozimus is "Zosimus."
- God Bless Aremorica!