The Whole North Into Gaul

[Flavivs Aetivs]

So finally back to this thread.

After a lot of work I have expanded my article significantly, although it's not nearly complete. I have a variety of more ideas to add, as well as the whole chapters on the Huns and their Foederati. I also need to write and extend/revise the section on Roman Foederati, and still have the whole chapter on Attila's campaign through Gaul. The analysis of the battle itself has yet to be expanded, as after writing up sections on Hun, Roman, German, and Alan warfare I plan to use that to go even more in depth into the battle.

Anyways, I need some fresh perspective, and was wondering if you guys would look over it and make suggestions for changes/etc.

Also, excuse the cheesy chapter titles. I'll probably turn them into something more professional later.